what do you think of these lyrics I wrote?

verse 1: you should see my home its like its a site see
i should of moved out the first time he didnt want me
dont even know what love is, caught in a broken home
the only time we ever talk is vertially through a phone
im lost at a crossroad and dont know which way i went
cause either way i go i lose something important
whos says i am different maybe your just not normal
who says im unworthy maybe youre just formal
and unwanted is a place ive visited many times
and you never know maybe its a perfect home for my life
but maybe im crazy or maybe my minds rewired
but im so sick of crying all my tears are tired
cause i cry and cry with no lonely tear
so maybe im scared of the world or scared of the mirror
chorus: so i hold on tight to catch my grip
wipe away the tears and forget about it
so i hold back my tears and lock the door
and im not crying not crying anymore
verse 2: so i wish i could be perfect and not feel alone
and i wish i had a perfect place to call a perfect home
i wish i felt loved at least some of the time
i wish abandoning was commiting a crime
and i wish my entire childhood wasnt learning how to live
and learning how to raise myslef to live, love, and forgive
and i wish i hadnt given away the things i had
and i wish i had shut out the boos and replaced with a clap
and out of things i did right i always did something wrong
and all the pain i must feel pouring my life into a song
so maybe im crazy or my brain is just rewired
so im so sick of crying all my tears are tired
cause i cry and cry with no lonely tear
maybe im scared of the world or scared of the mirror
chorus
bridge: so when the earth dont want me and the heavens aint looking
down
just keep in your mind someday that youll make them proud
and maybe love is the glue to fixing a broken home
and maybe your mind is the one this to make you not alone
chorus